An Angel's Voice
By: James Ziegler
Rufus Brown had a relationship with
his grandmother that no one could describe. She had always been there for him, after both of his parents had died in a car accident. Rufus was only five years
old at the time. His grandmother, Anita, took in him and his sister Gloria. Anita most definitely
did not have the money to take care of them. She put the kids as her first
priority. When times got tough, Rufus remembers her always saying, “We’ll make do
with what we got”.
Every night, after dinner, Rufus,
his sister, and grandmother would sit on their front porch. With a Coca-Cola in
hand they would talk into the evening. “Have I got a story for the two of you!”
she would say. Rufus and Gloria loved her stories. Their favorites were the
ones about their mother. “Tell us another one about mama!”. She had endless
stories about her. Anita named her daughter Ella, after her favorite singer
Ella Fitzgerald. “Your mama was the most beautiful baby I’d ever seen” she
said. “She was one crazy child I’ll tell you that!”
“Rufus honey!”, Rufus walked into his
grandmother’s room. Anita was sitting in her rocking chair while Ella
Fitzgerald’s “Summertime” played on the radio. “Yes grandmama?” “Come sit with
me darling”. Rufus went and sat on her lap. As they rocked together Anita said,
“Doesn’t she have just the most beautiful voice!” “Sure thing” Rufus replied.
Sitting and listening to music with
her was the most soothing thing in the world. It was something Rufus would
never forget as long as he lived.
When Rufus was eighteen, he came
home from his job at the lumber yard. “Evenin’ grandmama” he said as he walked
in the door. “Nice to see you too!” shouted Gloria. Rufus went over and kissed
his sister on the forehead. “Rufus honey can you go get the mail for me darlin’?”,
Anita was making the kids favorite dinner, chicken pot-pie. He did not want to leave
the house because it smelled so good. “Sure” “Hurry honey dinner is just about
done”. As Rufus got to the mail he heard something fall, then his sister
scream.
Rufus ran to the house as fast as he
could, he flung the door open and ran in. He saw his grandmother lying on the
floor with Gloria beside her. She was unconscious. “She’s still breathing!”
Gloria yelled. Rufus picked up his grandmother. His first instinct was to run
to the hospital. He and Gloria started running with Anita in his arms.
Down the road they saw someone getting
into their car. “Please help my grandmama fell!”, Rufus exclaimed to the man.
The man hesitated at first, “I’ll drive you to the hospital” he said as he
hurried into his car. Rufus and Gloria climbed into the back.
“Please hurry she’s not breathing!”
yelled Rufus, he started to cry. A tear fell on his grandmother’s face. He
wiped it away and kissed her cheek. “We’re gonna help you I promise” he
whispered in her ear.
As they were waiting in the hospital, the
doctor came out. “Hey doc how’s she doin?” Rufus asked. “I’m sorry son, but
your grandmother has passed, she had a heart attack” said the doctor. Rufus
stared blankly at the doctor. Tears started to roll down his cheeks. Gloria
grabbed Rufus’ arm and started sobbing.
A couple of days later, Rufus used
all of his money to have a funeral for his beloved grandmother. To his
surprise, more people came than he thought would. Before Anita was buried he
went over to say his last good bye. He leaned over her body, “You look
beautiful grandmama”. He put his head down to her ear, “I love you” he
whispered. He kissed her cheek and walked away.
As the casket lowered into the
ground, he heard singing. It was Gloria. She was singing “Round Midnight” by
Ella Fitzgerald. He put his hand to his face in shock. He had never heard her
sing. Her voice was angelic. Just like Ella’s.
He looked up to the sky with tears
in his eyes, and smiled.

4 comments:
This was really well written. I think the purpose is that you shouldn't wait until it's too late to express yourself or show love to others. That's probably not the purpose but that's what i got from it
This was beautifully written. I loved how you incorporated music into the story of the family. To me the purpose was that family doesn't come in just one form. Rufus and Gloria didn't have a mother and father but still grew up surrounded by the love and joy of their grandmother. The dialogue was perfect. I loved the ending. This was really really touching. Great job J. :)
Very well done Bud. The various aspects you included were tied together very smooth and allowed the story to be read as a story rather than a bunch of related facts. I believe the theme is to love what you have while you have it, take everything in the moment in, and be able to enjoy it still while its gone.
I think the purpose of this narrative was to help people who have lost a loved one, because the main idea of the story is that even if something bad happens something good might happen from it.
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