Our family
had just arrived at the beach. The sun was high and it was crowded. My sisters
played in the water and sand while I sat, reading yesterday’s news. My parents
want me to be adventurous and experience something new, but how could I manage
to do that when we come here every year.
The beach
during the day time is hot and crowded, you could look in any direction and see
the same thing: people. My sisters love this beach, but I find it uninteresting
and a bit lonesome at times. Every time we come here I am forced to leave my
favorite things behind: my video games and my dog, Sandy.
I close my
eyes and try to imagine these things. My mind goes to me sitting at home at my
kitchen counter, reading the comics section of the newspaper while eating my
favorite cereal. It is a Saturday morning, my favorite day of the week.
Everyone else in my house is awake at this hour, but I love to sleep in until
Sandy comes in and licks my nose until I open my eyes. I head into the kitchen
for cereal, then back to my room to play more video games. As I am thinking
about my usual Saturday, my daydream is rudely interrupted by my younger sister,
who is tapping me on my shoulder asking me to build a sand castle with her.
Usually I would say no and go back to day dreaming, but since there was nothing
at all to do, I said yes.
She began
piling sand into her pail. It was completely dry with no water, but I didn’t want
to discourage her. She tipped her pail upside down and the sand fell out, into
a large pile. She looked at me as if she wanted direction. I told her she
should fill one of her pails with water, so she could add it to the sand and
make it stick together. She smiled at me and ran down to the water. I liked the
way she looked up to me, she was six years old and I was fourteen.
While I waited
for her to get back, I picked up the newspaper and started reading over the
comics section again. My older sister, who was sixteen, started with me like
she usually does when she is bored. She asked me why I was reading yesterday’s
news, I told her it was interesting. She asked me why I was helping my younger sister
with her castle, I told her it was because I was trying to waste time before we
left the boring beach. She asked me why I hated the beach, I told her it was
boring. She told me the beach has lots of adventure and is filled with new
people to meet. I knew she was talking about the boy she met by the shore
because she smiled when she said it. I told her I didn’t want to meet anyone
new because I like the people I already know. She asked me who I know. I
thought for a moment. Who do I know? I know my family, my dog Sandy, and one
boy from school whom I help with homework. When I really started to think hard
on it, I realized that I didn’t have many friends, which I would usually be
okay with. Today was different, though. I looked away from her. I knew my life wasn’t
the most interesting one, but how could I not realize that I don’t have any
friends.
My parents
called out to us from the top of the hill where the sand met the grass. They
said it was time to leave. I started to get an empty feeling in my stomach. But
why? I was usually happy to be going home. I picked up my newspaper and headed
to the top of the hill. Once I arrived at the top my parents head the car
packed and ready to go. I looked back at the beach and thought of what my
sister told me about the beach having adventure. Then I got in the car and we
headed home. 
3 comments:
I think that the author's purpose behind this is to show that if you never try to look outwards from your daily routine, then you wont be able to see everything else that there is to do around you. Nice story!
I think the purpose of this story is to realize that there is more to life then what you do as a normal routine. That the beach trips were the way to expand yourself and meet more people. Great Story!!
I think the author's purpose is that when you are so caught up in your daily routine then you can miss what's around you. Good detail!
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