James Hughes
Robert Frank Narrative
H English 102
What Comes Around…
Drip……drip……drip. There
it was again. That maddening sound that didn’t so much annoy me as it reminded
me of all the bills that needed to get paid. My name is Eric Ward. The health
inspector came in today, and what he told me next wasn’t exactly inspiring.
“You better get this dump into better shape or you won’t be able to serve
anyone here before the month’s out,” he told me. There was no sympathy in his
eyes as he said it, and just like that, three years of my life were gone. I had
struggled to buy this place, to manage it virtually on my own, and it was all
for nothing. Rent was due soon, and I barely had enough to pay for that, much
less fix my leaking roof or deep clean the place. I closed up the bar for the
night and went home to my apartment down the block. The street was a little
darker than normal, some of the streetlamp bulbs had burnt out and public
services hadn’t gotten around to replace them. I heard a soft call, a plead for
help, coming from nearby. Was it my imagination? No, there was a small figure
sitting on a doorstep not far from me. A bundle of clothes, shivering and
calling quietly. I don’t live in the best neighborhood, and I was a little
anxious to get home because I was never out this late. But something about how
pitiful the bundle was made me want to know more. I approached the bundle and
called to it. The bundle looked up at me from its sorrows. I kneeled on one
knee introduced myself. The bundle had a name, Olivia, which she told me. I
asked her why she was crying. “I’m lost,” she replied, with a little sniffle,
“I ran away from home and I don’t know how to get back.” I asked if she had a
last name, she said it was Clarke. A common name, I thought. I asked her if she
would like to come with me to the local police station, so they could find her
parents. She hesitated for a moment, then agreed. On the way I talked to
Olivia. She was shy, and didn’t say much, but she wore nice clothes and the way
she talked marked her as well educated. Once we arrived at the police station
the police agreed to find her parents and took my name, phone number, and
address just in case they needed me again. I would have liked to stay until
Olivia’s parents arrived, but it was very late, and I had to work the next day.
I finally returned to my apartment and fell into a deep sleep, knowing that I
would have to return to the bar in only a couple hours.
I woke up the next day late, late enough that I missed
opening my bar at the normal time. I rushed to get ready and headed down to the
bar. If I didn’t make money I wouldn’t be able to pay rent for my apartment and
certainly not enough to fix the bar. I only made about half my profits that day
and wouldn’t be able to pay rent for my apartment, meaning I might have to start
sleeping in the bar relatively soon, which would also be permanently closed
within a week. And it was Olivia’s fault. If I hadn’t stopped to help her that
night, I might have at least made rent for my apartment. But speak of the
devil, there she was. In my bar. I stopped for a second, then continued with my
business. A taller man stood behind her, his face oddly similar to hers. The
man introduced himself as Mr. Clarke. I offered him a drink, he politely turned
me down. “I wanted to thank you for helping my daughter last night. You didn’t
have to do that, and I don’t know what would have happened to her if you hadn’t
gotten her to the police,” Mr. Clarke said. “For all the good it did me,” I
said, “This bar will be closed within the week and it’s partially because I
spent my time doing that.” Mr. Clarke frowned at that. “Why would you be
closing?” he asked. I explained my situation to Mr. Clarke, the rent, the
leaks, the health inspector. Mr. Clarke smiled and said, “Lucky for you, I’m a
businessman that buys restaurants and refurbishes them in order for them to
turn a profit. I’ve had my eye on yours for weeks, and when I found out that
you were the one who owned it and helped my daughter I was quite delighted. I
would normally buy the place after it closed, but since it appears I am in your
debt I think I will purchase and refurbish your bar.” “How does that make me
lucky,” I asked, “This bar is still mine. Not yours. I’m not selling out.” Mr.
Clarke’s smile grew. “That’s the catch,” he said, “You will be able to run and
maintain full ownership of your bar after I am finished refurbishing it, as
long as a small portion of your earnings go to me at the end of the month. Let
us say, until the refurbishment costs are paid. In the meantime, I will make
you my employee, which will grant you a substantial salary to pay off your
outstanding rent costs.” I stared at him in disbelief, “You would do that?
Why?” Mr. Clarke looked at Olivia as he spoke, “You brought my daughter back to
me. She means everything to me. I am simply returning the favor.” Of course, I
accepted the offer.
5 comments:
I think that the purpose of the story was to show how doing a small thing for somebody else can make a big difference in their lives and possibly yours as well.
I really enjoyed your narrative and the way it keeps the reader interested in it. I think the purpose show's that those who are caring to others will be rewarded by their work somehow.
I believe that the author's purpose in the story is to show us that when we do good deeds without believing that there is a reward. That good things will happen to them.
I think the purpose of this story is to show how being kind and doing something to help others can end up with a great reward although you nay not realize it right away.
I think the authors purpose of this narrative is to show that caring does a lot. If you are nice and care about someone or do something for them, you will get something in return.
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